Hi, Kayla! Nice pictures. I really like the compositions; my eye moves back toward the boat in the first image, following the angled path of the water. The second image creates a clear focal point and the smooth yellow of the car contrasts the textured grey in the cement below it. My only critique is that there doesn't seem to be an object in either picture in the foreground. There is a clear middle ground and background, but nothing super close to the camera's lens to create an extended DOF. Still, great work!
Hi, Kayla! Nice pictures. I really like the compositions; my eye moves back toward the boat in the first image, following the angled path of the water. The second image creates a clear focal point and the smooth yellow of the car contrasts the textured grey in the cement below it. My only critique is that there doesn't seem to be an object in either picture in the foreground. There is a clear middle ground and background, but nothing super close to the camera's lens to create an extended DOF. Still, great work!
ReplyDeleteYes, you need a very close foreground object in each image. Try even higher apertures.
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